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日期:2019-11-09编辑作者:外语留学

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There  are three people in my family. Father,mother and me. My famliy is a traditional small Chinese family.

  分析员:马川

My father’s height  is the symbol of him. If you see him,you will see his height first.He has a thin and healthy body. My father is a successful manager, and he is a warm-hearted man. He works at a company, everyone in the company knows him because he is friendly to his friends.

  ◆上海,自费本科首次被拒签

My mother is a housewife. She looks after our family and gets ready for the three meals every day. She often helps me with my study. She is slender and beautiful. Some people say that she is pretty. I agree.

  学生背景:

My name is Yan Si Qi and my parents call me Jason. I’m a boy of twelve. I’m the only child. I look like my father.

  今年高三毕业,偷懒没参加高考

We love each other. We are happy at home .This is my warm family!

  申请的是州立大学,本科不设国际奖学金,没奖,全自费34200美元/年

  资产状况(估计是我的致命伤)

  父亲年收入250000人民币左右,自己拥有的公司(但是这点签证时没有说,因为之前有人说,说了反而不好)

  母亲年收入70000人民币,政府机关工作人员

  叔叔在美国担保20000美金一年

  家庭存款:200000人民币,20000美金(股票盈利,但是抛售股票的凭证不见了~估计又是一个问题)

  另有房产一处,压根没用上

 新濠7158官网, 谈话内容:

  Me:Hi,madam!

  Vo:Hi!(此时还对我微笑,貌似对我印象很好的样子)What school are you going to study?

  Me:Rutgers University.

  分析:在常理上,开场问题只要正面回答就OK了,但是如果VO并没有要打断你的意思,申请者可以为以后问题的回答作些铺垫,比如进一步地说一下自己的在美国的学习计划。

  VO:OK, and what are you going to study?

  分析:对于申请者学习计划的考察。

  Me: Excuse me?(此时没弄明白,以为她还在问我去啥学校?后来发现是问我学啥?)

  VO: I mean what are you going to study there?

  Me:Oh, in the first two years,I will study general courses and then I plan to major in sociology.

  分析:这里申请者的回答是有效的回答,但是可以再多做点铺垫说明,比如具体阐述一下自己为什么要学习sociology的原因,以显示出自己出国目的的明确性。

  VO:Ok,who will surport you?

  Me:My father and my mother and my uncle.(由于一点点紧张,居然不说my parents,而说了my father and my mother~)

  VO: What do your parents do?

  Me:My father is a general manager of a company,the company sells chemicals used in water-cleaning systems in big hotels and factories. My mother works in the government department. Her job is to test silk or cottons…(最后她打断我,好像不在乎我后面说的内容了)

  分析:这里的回答我已经在上面做了具体的提议。父亲自己拥有企业,可以围绕这个来说明自己赴美资金的充足性,加之母亲在政府部门从事的工作年薪也是不错的收入,并要在陈述的同时,递给VO相关的工作以及收入证明。

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